Garz - Looking for writing requests [Looking for 1 more request!]

Hrm. I couldn't seem to tackle the pacing of this one, so I apologize if it goes too quickly.

Also, I tried to do some digging to properly capture Taakuin and Silver; both of you are fairly diverse persona-wise, so hopefully I caught it (or came close!). Hope this is enjoyable.

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The sea weasel squeezed himself against a tree.

By now, this should've been a normal occurrence - one he'd have grown used to hearing, used to feeling. But fear had its way of slipping past rational thought, past the ever-present reminder that this was a daily occurrence. It was fear that had the small buizel's heart thumping in his diminutive chest, fear which caused his small arms to shiver.

Gradually, the stomping passed. He didn't even know what it actually was - it felt more massive than any pokémon he'd ever witnessed, and from the impact of what he assumed were footsteps he assumed it was bipedal. He'd never actually seen it - whenever he heard the stomping, he'd race and hide until it passed, intrinsically aware that it meant him harm.

"Taakuin?"

The timid buizel scampered up the tree he was hiding behind with the maneuverability of a pachirisu at the voice. He poked his head down from the first branch and exhaled - it was Verat.

Technically, the luxio's name was Verräter, but that didn't exactly roll off the tongue quite as well.

"Taakuin, hurry before it comes back!"

And down the tree scampered the buizel, following the luxio as the two scampered between trees. "What..." Buizel wasn't sure how to ask, as he paused to leap over a downed log. "What is that thing?"

"Silver said he found a human building."

That was indeed important enough for Verat to have dodged the question. Taakuin's eyes widened as Verat continued, "Said he was waiting for you. Maybe it's a way off this island."

Silver.

Taakuin couldn't help but smile subconsciously as he heard the name. When he'd arrived, he'd been scared - not to mention his intrinsically timid nature keeping him from approaching most other pokémon. But when he'd met Silver... something had clicked. It was almost like, despite the houndoom's easygoing demeanor, he was safe with him. And comfortable.

"Silver!"

And Taakuin couldn't help but chuckle softly. Houndoom was, as tended to be the case, sound asleep. The no-nonsense Verat's call didn't wake him.

"Silver! Gah, you said you'd be there and ready!"

Still no response.

"Silver! I know you can hear me!"

That caused a response - the houndoom smacked his lips, and rolled over. Hopping with rage, Verat bounded forward and nudged the larger pokémon. "SILVER!"

"Fine, fine, I'm up." Silver yawned loudly, smacking his lips as he slowly shifted to a stand. His eyes shifted to the two pokémon hazily, not quite awake yet. "Ah, hey Taak. What're you two doing here?"

Taakuin opened his mouth to speak, but was interrupted by a very irritated Verat. "The compound!"

"...huh?"

"You said - "

"Ah, yes." Silver yawned once again. "Interrupted a good nap. I found what looks like a big assembly plant in a small cove. I think it's the way off the island."

The blue bow around Taakuin's tail shifted at the words. "So we can go back?"

"Maybe." Silver stretched, yawning a third time. "I didn't search around."

"That's how I got here." Verat glanced between the two. "Is it how you got here?"

There was a short pause, then Taakuin stepped in. "No, I told you how I got here - there was a light on the water while I was hunting fish, and it kept beckoning me, so I - "

"Not you."

Another pause, as Silver seemed to properly wake himself up. "...I don't know."

"You don't know?"

Another pause. "I was asleep. Now I'm having trouble finding my cave." Silver shifted forward, moving at a brisk walk. "This way."


The trio scampered off a bit more, Taakuin glancing back and forth as they did so. The Buizel remained close to Silver, although his faster movement resulted in him getting ahead a bit, then falling behind a bit in a loop. Now that he was awake, the amiable Silver nodded pleasantly at Taakuin, who smiled back. The trio reached the edge of a deep cliff face - there was a sizeable distance down.

Suddenly, Verat froze. Taakuin glanced at him in perplexion, which was added to when he noticed that Silver had also frozen, horns seemingly more rigid. Taakuin stared at the blue eyes. "What's wro - "

"Run."

And then the three were racing away, running alongside the edge of the cliff. Taakuin was informed as to what was chasing them shortly thereafter - as the ground behind them exploded into shrapnel. There were a trio of machines - all three land based - that were firing what looked like shells of electricity at the trio.

Taakuin noted Silver hesitate for a fraction of a moment, then return to running. "I can't handle three." He muttered... which meant he'd interacted with these particular hostiles before.

The general easygoing calm in his voice, however, relaxed Taakuin a lot more than he'd have figured.

"That's alright. If we keep running, we'll XIOOO!"

Both Taakuin and Silver froze, swerving to one side - grass had overgrown over a corner of the cliff, and Verat had stepped onto it, plummeting downwards. The buizel was immediately at the side of the drop.

"Verräter!" He shouted, as his eyes scanned around the decline. He didn't see the Luxio falling, but also didn't see him on the ground or walls. Had -

Further thought was cut off as Silver grabbed Taakuin with his mouth and darted away, the area the two had been standing on exploding with a triple salvo of the unusual shells. They'd permitted the hostiles to get astonishingly close, and the machines were taking advantage of this by firing at the scampering houndoom - who darted over a rock, barely clearing it before tacking a fierce right, diving into a small gulley before vaulting back.

The professional skill and precision of Silver's movements was astonishing to Taakuin, who could only watch with surprise. It was clear that Silver had done this sort of thing before - and that he was rather good at it.

Suddenly, the buizel found himself dropped fairly roughly. Before he could respond, a paw covered his mouth. "Shh!"

The two pokémon remained absolutely still, as the air above them whooshed with the sound of the two machines - it registered in Taakuin's dazed mind that Silver had found a small shielded ditch for the two of them to wait in.

The two waited for a moment in place. Taakuin actually found himself shifting subtly into Silver's grip, and the houndoom found himself shifting into what was almost a hug. The two smiled, relaxed one more.

Gradually, Taakuin glanced up. "Are they gone? Verat..."

"I didn't see him when he went down, Taak." Silver stood up to confirm his ears - the three machines are gone. "We'll have to make our way down there to check, and that means going past the factory I'd mentioned."

The much smaller buizel couldn't see out of the ditch even when standing, and thus hopped up, peeking over its lip. There he saw the large compound - composed of several buildings. It had an uneasy and unnatural air to it. Still, he nodded - getting off the island was the goal.



"It's obvious you're not listening."

It was a human, on a telephone. Silver was moving slowly, trying to avoid either of them making noise as they overheard half of the conversation. "I am aware that your grant provided me with a maximum-evolution pokémon, but magneton is a triplicate according to the machine."

"This way." Whispered Silver, as the two pokémon scampered away, barely catching "Perhaps a golem would suffice, and I know you - "


"Hey!"

The two pokémon swerved - and froze. It was a leafeon - but that wasn't the unnerving point. This leafeon was a walking cable box - wires were sticking out of its spine, one of its eyes was replaced with circuitry, and it looked more like a modern day version of Frankenstein’s monster than a pokémon.

The leafeon untensed. "You... you didn't attack me! Every other Houndoom I've met immediately attacked me."

"Hrm. Not too fond of fighting." Silver looked the altered pokémon up and down. "That, uh..."

"Never mind that! I know a way off the island - you have to escape quickly!"

"What? Then why haven't - "

"I can't - they've got sensors hooked up to me. If you get out, you can get help, right?"

Taakuin stepped towards the leafeon hesitantly. "Are... you alright?"

The leafeon turned towards the buizel. "It doesn't matter - this way!"

He took off. And, after a moment of hesitation, so did Silver and Taakuin. The buizel noted a strange look in Silver's eyes - like he understood a lot more than he let on. It was a bit more stoic than his typical easygoing style, like he was trying to remember something intensely familiar but it wasn't quite 'clicking'.

"In here."

Leafeon stepped into the room. And, moments before Silver could do the same, Leafeon jerked, "Wait!"

The houndoom stopped - as an orange light shone into the room. Leafeon looked around with mild panic in his eyes. "Oh no!"

"...a security light?"

"You know?"

Silver shook his head. "No." He said abruptly, a little more forcefully than it needed to be.

"Oh." Unshaken, Leafeon continued, "Well, uh. It's a security sensor - they know I'm supposed to be in here, and know no other pokémon should be here. I thought there'd be time while it was shut off - but it leads to the tunnel to get off the island safely. If two pokémon are caught under the light, it'll go off."

Leafeon scampered past Taakuin, who turned, confused. "Where are you - "

"I can distract them - at least one of you should make it through!"

"But if there's nobody - "

The leafeon bounded to a corner, out of the room. "It doesn't care if nobody's in the room - they know they can find me at any moment! You should have some time to get through."

And away the leafeon went. Taakuin stepped towards the corner, still surprised.

"He's telling the truth."

Taakuin turned - to note Silver's blue eyes staring into his identically-blue ones. "And I've got an idea."

"Wh-what?" Taakuin was most bothered by the not-so-subtle smirk on Silver's face. The buizel slowly stepped backwards as Silver advanced, until the sea weasel's back butted against the building's wall.

"I'm sure it won't check inside me. We can slide you there."

"I-inside you?" The comment was made more clear as Silver began licking his chops. Taakuin swallowed. "I - "

"Don't worry, Taak. I'll swallow you whole - it won't hurt."

"But - "

"Don't you trust me?"

There was a short pause, while blue eyes stared into blue eyes.

"...yes."

"Then come."

Taakuin was still a bit hesitant as he was pulled forward by Silver's strong paws. He swallowed, still a bit nervous as Silver leaned forward.

"That's good, just relax..."

Silver's soothing reinforcement helped steel Taakuin's nerves. As the houndoom's maw opened, there was one last bout of hesitation from the smaller pokémon - before, wedging his eyes shut, he placed his trust in the dark pokémon, leaning forward.

Silver wasted no time - in an instant, the buizel's head was in the houndoom's mouth. His tongue worked its way along the smaller pokémon as he slowly worked his way down, mouth widening to engulf the flotation sack and shoulders in one motion.

Taakuin's eyes bulged open.

It was warm. The soft, comforting feeling of the Silver's inner fire was incredibly soothing. And the tongue - it was like a massage, slowly kneading the buizel's surprisingly plush fur. Taakuin's world was spinning with comfort as he slowly slipped forward, Silver engulfing his chest - then the tongue got to work on his sensitive stomach.

It was no surprise that the buizel was rock hard as he continued to enter the houndoom's throat - as was Silver himself. The buizel entering his throat was shifting - not quite struggling, but moving just the same. Each move shot straight through the 'doom's nervous system, each motion sending a tingle from the tips of his horns to the edge of his cock. It was all he could do to keep his steady pace, to keep himself from slurping down the delicious buizel in one gulp, to elongate the pleasure.

When the tip of the buizel's cock slowly slid into his maw, extracting a taste of pre.

Pleasure wracked Silver's body like a current. His desires would not stand for any more waiting - craning his head back, he slurped down the buizel like a noodle - eliciting a pleasured moan from within his throat. With one great swallow, he felt Taakuin bulge down his neck, before curling into his stomach.

His throbbing cock erupted with seed onto the wall of the building as he felt Taakuin do the same from within him.

Silver was dazed - he'd underestimated how pleasurable eating Taakuin would be. He remained in place a bit, licking his chops, and enjoying the occasional shift he felt inside his stomach.

For Taakuin, the pleasure hadn't finished. He was being cradled and kneaded by the houndoom's powerful stomach walls, keeping him hard. Slowly, as the air began to deplete, he found himself drifting off - still subconsciously moving in a way to stimulate his devourer.

It was a very comforted houndoom that finally trotted down that corridor, slipping away from the island. The only physical evidence that he was there was his cum, which was slowly trickling into the earth.


"Interesting..."

The monitor switched off. The human began writing furiously - he had quite a few notes to add now, as he spoke aloud to himself.

"You're proving a very interesting experiment, 'Silver'."

Almost absently, he began stroking the fur of the pokémon lying near him - whos ears perked up at the attention.

"Nice job, Verräter..."





~ Garz

Whoops, missed a few responses in there.

That was awesome! Thanks! ^..^

Th-that story... Well, let's just say it was a pleasure to read. ^^

Thank you both! It's always good to know that people are enjoying my stories.

There's still room for one last request, although it seems I'm a bit slim on takers, heh.

Would it be alright if I make another request?

Aah... thank you so much! It was a very nice read... and well written, I might add. You did a great job capturing our personalities... and it seems like there's going to be a sequel with how it ended... X3

Again, thanks much. I'm very grateful. ;3

Whoop, fell offline for a bit there. Catching up...

Again, thanks much. I'm very grateful. ;3

I'm glad you enjoy it! I was honestly a bit worried; kudos on making fairly diverse characters.

Would it be alright if I make another request?

Heh, go right ahead. From the lack of requests over the past few days, it seems that the general desire for them has run its course. ^_^ Oh well.

Subjects Involved: Preys aggron and rhyperior Pred arbok all three are male
Type of vore: Oral on aggron, tail on rhyperior
Sex/Yiff: yes
Willing or Unwilling: both of them are Unwilling
Reformation: yes after they digest

would I be able to ask for a story? <,<

If it's possible, may I request something?